Offer To Finance Comp. After Court House Fail To Sale

Here is what I have so far as a presentation: 3 ring binder W/ cover insert sleeve document sleeves Bid sheet for rehab of roofing Bid sheet for other general rehab My own combined estamate sheet with the rest of the details for rehab Here is where I am mainly looking for help Cover page stating: legal phys. address How I determined FMV (county assesors, 3 block radius, comparibles) Then got realtors comparables for what this size, type & condition of house is selling forin the area. Then a detailed description of all known work that needs to be done to put house in marketable condition. at the end of this I put sort of a resume of mine saying that I would be the general contractor with out really saying GC, because I have no license Then a whole bunch of pictures What order should I put this stuff in? Pics first for shock value? my cover page? and am I missing anything or can I add anything else?